An Old Friend Poem by Elisha Chhabra

An Old Friend

Rating: 2.8


The day ends and he asks
'Didn't you write anything today? '
To me, that's not an inquiry
No merely a question
Not even a formality
One does to keep a friend
And I think back
Why haven't I written about this yet
About this man
Who doesn't only read my write,
Admires it,
Compliments me,
Not all the times everyone does.
Appreciates me the most,
Not when I don't deserve.
Enjoys my oddness in public,
Not when I try faking it
Listens to my long stupid stories,
Always
Who is obsessed with me,
Only when I make him feel proud.
Who reminds me who I am
Every time I forget.
Why haven't I yet talked about this to my pen
That There's someone
who was there when nobody was,
who will be there even when
I won't be there for myself,
He knows the inside of me,
He cares enough to slap me
When I set the bar of my life lower.
He is an old friend <3
Our friendship is time,
Our friendship is eternity.

Thursday, May 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The chinmay 17 November 2015

superb....fantastic poetry...good job

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 June 2014

Magnificent dear, superb. Siya_! !

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

A well written poem. But I could not understand [3. Do you mean one who is less than the three (trinity) ?

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Elisha Chhabra 01 May 2014

I was seriously finding this line uncomfortable, it was a simple mistake. thanks :)

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Juan Olivarez 01 May 2014

Why haven't I wrote is incorrect. Why haven't I written is correct.

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