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Life Or Death Poetry


An Offer With Love


I had a theory
that became from
Overthinking you
That you were
not staying for you
And hence an offer with love
Was not exactly truth
But I knew that would still love you
But I said it for you so you
would not feel so bad if you had to
And that you did not need to
For I did not want you to
I was way overthinking
I also made sure you knew
I still cared about you
I did not want you go
But I wanted you to
Do it if you had to
And that I will be here for you
And so very difficult to
Express that to you
Especialy in the state
I felt at the time
Even now it is hard to describe

Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013
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My story behind that poem.. My anxiety was big part of it and depression..

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