An Ode To The Emptiness Poem by cold september

An Ode To The Emptiness

Rating: 5.0


the nightingales are singing
songs of insecurity
to reassure the angels
about their own stupidity
the fairytale is over
the dwarfs are here to play
and since thinking is forbidden
I don’t really want to say
it is too chaotic...

since the blank is taking over
my thoughts are pushed
too deep and lower

the emptiness of mind
is to be applauded

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It's always nice to give the mind a rest and play with realities.Imaginative poem.

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Naé Tyler 03 September 2008

I love this! you're really good. the last two lines are just grand

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Saint Cynosure 03 September 2008

This is a very neat writing, most enjoyable...

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