An Evening Stroll Poem by Tenzin Namdak

An Evening Stroll



Into the purplish azure's air
After hours of rain fare
The sky crystal ink
Though the sunlight sink

I stroll on patchy field
With grief unhealed
Of being all alone
But i never moan

Loitering step by step
To her i am in debt
For endured me a pain early
by crippling my heart's plea

Green leafs on the tree
Bonded, its not free
Unless the wind blow
And they hover down slow

Loitering full stretch like a fool
To her i am deeply thankful
For she is the wind that relief
n freed me, unbind to dead leaf

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem came into poet's mind in the late evening stroll when there is twilight and after hours of rain when sky looks crystal clear, he express sorrowfulness of being alone, but at the same time he is thankful to the girl whom he felt and enduring him a heartbreaking pain in his early life, because it make him stronger, and free,
he saw a leaf on the tree when wind blow it unbinds the leaf from tree so he uses a metaphor that wind is his lover and leaf is him and love is the tree which he believes so when wind blow it unbind the leaf from the tree same as she made him free by breaking up and soon he will be dead inside like a unbind leaf soon it'll be dead too
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Tenzin Namdak

Tenzin Namdak

Ravangla, south sikkim, india
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