America Poem by Antonio Liao

America

Rating: 4.9


wonderful land that makes
us one

fantastic place where
everyone chases
glorious as it is, a home
where everybody belongs

you have been the pot
of the potter hat
a dream that every race
has raised

alluring to the autumn spring,
where winter awaits the
crystal clear of summer

a beauty that my heart gives
the start of my journey's part
amusing, my soul rejoices
the scenery that offers me fall

let my life make the same
a moment where i remain
stand still,
dear America you await
me, till i meet

freedom that you give
life as we live, thing has
to believe, nation has to
live

cherish America

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 12 June 2009

dedication towards the country, , .. a true devoted citizen reflected in dis piece.. nice write.

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James B. Earley 19 August 2008

You write...of a special place that has come so far......yet.......has so far....to go!

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Estrella Baldemosa 04 July 2008

alluring it is...but it ain't utopia...good write though. high marks from me too...

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