Alone In My Room Poem by Doris Cornago

Alone In My Room

Rating: 5.0


Life can be glorious simplified
Breakfast among the plants
Idly soaking you in a tub
Scrubbing your back
Writing poem on
My tab swiftly
Like breeze
Brushes
On my
Cheek on
Sneak snack
A hot afternoon
Alone in my room
Feet tucked in divan
Napping by the window
Scrolling past book scenes
An ice cream cone with choco
Fudge, smudges my lips, cheeks
Hands sticky, lick fingers one by one

Alone In My Room
Sunday, May 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: free,free mind,freedom,lifestyle,pleasure,success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What's success? You are often asked this question at some point and you tend to define it with things you've accomplished and material things that show exactly that - certificates of ownership, house, car, jewels, positions, degrees which only clutter your physical and mental compartments. I don't blame you - the world adores a successful person and spurns a loser. This poem expresses another point of view on success.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2018

Dear Doris, such a splendid write...10++++

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deborrahcornago 14 May 2018

Thank you for dropping in and appreciating such a flippant expression. :)

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Kostas Lagos 14 May 2018

This poem is a success! Excellent!

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deborrahcornago 14 May 2018

Indeed, thank you for your warm reception. :)

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Nudershada Cabanes 13 May 2018

A picture of a relaxing day, savoring life's simple pleasures. perfect.10

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deborrahcornago 14 May 2018

Yes, perfect for Mother's Day, don't you think? Thank you for affirmation. :)

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Doris Cornago 13 May 2018

On my bucket list of life's pleasures is to write an epic poem like Poe's The Raven. Haven't even started on it.

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