All Senses Gone Poem by Richard Wlodarski

All Senses Gone

Rating: 4.8


You lost your sight
Your road gone blind
Cognac in sun

You lost your hearing
Last night's listening
Misunderstanding

You lost your taste
In life's distaste
Left me for good

You lost your touch
No longer there
Feeling nowhere

Monday, January 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A thought provoking write. Full stars

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2023

Kerouac was very thought provoking, Poet Nair. May Your New Year Be Full & Bright!

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M. Asim Nehal 10 January 2023

Fantastic poem Richard, I liked it.5****

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2023

Very happy that you like it, Dr. Nehal. That's validation for The Kerouac Project of mine!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 January 2023

once more another profound from you Richard

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2023

May You Have A Profound New Year, LeeAnn!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 10 January 2023

You lost your touch No longer there Feeling nowhere ~ superb and expressive

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2023

I too really like that last stanza, Mahtab. It perfectly sums up Kerouac. May Your New Year Be Superb & Expressive!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 10 January 2023

Good prose poem, Richard. Enlivening

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Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2023

Very happy thay you like it, Kesav. May Your New Year Be Enlivening!

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