All In All Poem by David McLansky

All In All

Rating: 5.0


All in all,
Not a bad life
Brief Ectasy
Twixt long bouts
Of strife;
A lack of guidance
Amid a long education
Wisdom my goal
Weekly my desperation;
The search for true love
My daily obsession,
Poor choices made
in a world of expectation;
And then my life near the end
you arrived at my door,
My best true new friend
Your husband didn't want
You no more;
;
So in the end
At the last we discovered
A true love profound
Deep under the covers
You lost a hundred pounds,
You needn't have bothered

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David Mclansky 25 January 2016

And much love to you My sustaining MUSE; May you find a love Who looks like Tom Cruse

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Elaine Sept 27 January 2016

I left you a little poem on the Christmas 2015 post! I so miss this little banter back and forth with you and Laurel... sigh! Keep writing my friend, Tom Cruise is a dead end.... ha ha xo

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Elaine Sept 24 January 2016

Reading your words brings me home! A moving and heartfelt poem. Much love to you and your family! xo Elaine

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