Alarm Poem by Rehan Hyder
Alarm
On cerulean highway
not punctuated by
traffic lights buildings or biases
I stretched out and reached you
held you captive to my
encompassing passion
wearing each other like
custom made garments
wore each other down
energies enervated
like tattered egos at Abu Gharib
on a night like that
when desire hold out like
toddler’s scuffing feet
to school
alarm goes off on spousal cell
deep my friend, very good poem, i enjoyed the flow quite a bit and the reference to abu grahib. Awesome job
'wearing each other like custom made garments' I agree with Frank. This line stands out to me. It's a very succinct version of what I and Better Half were saying to each other earlier on. :) Memorable. t x
great simile...like garment..and smooth flow alarmed at the end... impressive composition....
'''Wearing each other, like custom made garments''' Sound the ALARM! Its getting a might Hot, in Pakistan, this morning! Rock Solid, my friend! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
when desire hold out like toddler’s scuffing feet to school... desire is desirte isn't it?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Hmm.. interesting thoughts transcribed! HG: -) xx