Agony..... Poem by RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Agony.....

Rating: 5.0


It was like a snake
Which gripped it's prey,
Trying to swallow it alive,
The pain in the mind
Writhed in tandem
To the time, never leaving
Even for a second,
Life seemed to be unbearable,
Thoughts of happiness
Seemed very distant,
Leaving memories
Of the past appearances,
With shadows of it
Dancing to the tune
Of the pain left, which the suffering
Made on the canvas
Of the forlorn mind torn
Into divisions of solitude ideas
Which ticked away in the light
Of the day gone unseen, unfelt.


Ravikiran Arakkal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with pain yet bursting with beauty. A rare combination my friend! Well done! 10/10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 March 2008

the description of agony was well written....

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Jing Jing 23 February 2008

very interresting piece of work....

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RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

RAVIKIRAN ARAKKAL

Trissur, Kerala State, India.
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