sometimes your best is not enough
sometimes your best is not good enough
sometimes your best is not appreciated - enough
adventure tours in appreciation tunnels
slog up steep cliffs climb through dark caves
adventure tours in company perspectives
legendary Moa forgot how to fly extinct
fossils emotive life decisions entomb delete
millions of years elapse embrace star flight
Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is an intriguing piece. The whole concept of Adventure Tours in Appreciation is such a compelling and innovative theme, I almost wish the piece was longer to explore that more. It does not, of course, leave the reader feeling like the piece is incomplete, because your last stanza reaches back into the mists of antiquity, then outward to the stars themselves, producing a massive context of contemplation far beyond the brevity of the writing. Again, very intriguing. Thank you.