Admonitions Poem by Doris Cornago

Admonitions

Rating: 5.0


Know
Teaching
Is not words
Uttered in anger
Admonitions hard
In stone, rules never
Bending, least of all
A rod for punishment,
Rather it envigorates
Inquisitive minds into
Exploring, sorting out
Information, poking
Into loopholes, fun
In new discoveries,
Colors mixed with
Hands, messing
Up but owning
Up to image
Completed
Creation
Owned
Self.

Admonitions
Saturday, April 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,creativity,free mind,growth,teacher
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Looking back on the way I brought up my children and how I taught them in my learning center, I can recommend a surefire way of making a child reach his full potential if given a good start by dedicated moms and secondary moms in schools.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 April 2018

Rather it envigorates Inquisitive minds into Exploring, .....creativity... expressed so well dear poetess. Doris Cornago.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Doris 15 April 2018

Children see us the way we truly are but love us just the same; shouldn't we return the favor? You're seeing me the way you see yourself, your true quality. Thank you for this knowledge.: -)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 April 2018

Dear Doris, such an inspiring write you have shared... big 10++++

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Doris Cornago 15 April 2018

Hi Bro. Yes, children inspire me. I believe that's what the Lord meant when he said, let the children come to me and again, from the mouth of babies will come praise: -)

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Lamar Cole 15 April 2018

This is a great and thought invoking write.

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Doris Cornago 15 April 2018

Yes, more so when people see themselves in the poem, on reflection. Thank you for the company, Lamar. I invoke, as well as provoke.: -)

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Lyn Paul 15 April 2018

A lovely presentation of words displayed with the letter D. Raising children and teaching them for their own life is a challenge of importance.

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Doris Cornago 15 April 2018

It truly is a challenge, Lyn Paul, and I never stopped growing since then. Thank you for dropping by.: -)

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