Action And Reaction Poem by Jack the Ripper
Action And Reaction
Smoke a cigar, end up dead
Eat a steak, end up dead
Drink too much, end up dead
That's the mantra of today, made to keep humans from play
The facts are this: the reaper's kiss
Don't smoke any cigars, end up dead
Don't eat any steaks, end up dead
Don't drink at all, end up dead.
Could get run over tomorrw, end up dead. Another 10 for this one. Keep writing. Love, Fran xx
A bit of a nihilistic take on life, but well-written and bluntly honest.
How about, moderate and end up old, coughing slightly and a bit tubby, but happy and not dead so early? thanks for the smile, Tai
This was too cool.... This gets a 10 from me Jack! Always, Linda
To quote the late great Jim Morrison: 'I don't believe in all that s***, but I'll tell you one thing: I'm going to get my kicks before the whole s***house goes up in flames'. Use your head, end up dead... Keep writing, this is great.
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12/30/2024 11:32:49 AM # 1.0.0
Very true! There are so many things we ''Can't'' do there's hardly room to take a step without fearing what damages we might be doing to ourself. Very good poem with a great message. Sincerely, Mary