Blunders from the past,
From trends they have done
Are such trends they learn
To fix their lives
Highly much better.
They clutch love that last
To yield them as one.
The union them earn
From the good that thrives
Much altogether.
The fixed key so vast
Like the brilliant sun,
That power they yearn
For the love that drives
Them free from woe’s fetter.
The first stanza is what I like, the author speaks the truth and believable. One learns from their past mistakes that is the truth, very well said and done. The piece of work though short but very meaningful. Thanks
I like your flow it reminds me of my work but your work is a bit complex good job
Acting better, polishing life today for a better tomorrow with the guidance of the lessons learnt from yesterday...............10+++
when someone made a mistake, it's no one's fault, just make it better the next time or as the author said, Act better, improve yourself and you'll be a better soul. Well done, mate.
Blunders from the past, From trends they have done Are such trends they learn To fix their lives Highly much better. acting better and learning form the past... it is good experience to learn from the experience...10
Life is a good teacher...the more we learn from life the better...you convey your wise thoughts very nicely there Obinna...thanks...10
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'Blunders from the past, From trends they have done Are such trends they learn To fix their lives Highly much better' well expressed indeed...I know we must learn lessons from past and make sure those things wont happen again...yet it is easier said than done though, if we have wounds...and pains... anyway I like your poetic expressions nice indeed..love can cast magic and heal wounds and woes...nice