Across The Waters Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

Across The Waters

Rating: 5.0


Oh, how fingers dance
still across a piano;
Like bird wings on the waters.
as I ask for tomorrow,
I shall not to forsake
as ripple to a wave;
I shall over come,
with love and devotion
and a whisper of love,
a roar of a devotion
to be one, as a rock
skipping across the water.
Frozen in time still motionless
forever lost in dawn's mist
waiting for the sun.
with the Waters so black and calm,
the mirrow of solace feeds my soul
peace and tranquility....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 01 April 2009

this is nice Randy. You poured out your feelings in here.Well penned.

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Surayya Abbas 20 May 2009

Beautiful feelings.Nice piece.

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Leslie Ching 13 April 2009

great personification and descriptions, i could picture every line in my head...simply put, another beautiful write...a definite 10+++

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 April 2009

brilliant imagery....so well done.......10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

another wonderful write.............painted images with words...........

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Ted Sheridan 06 April 2009

Another gem...................

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