Absence Of Self Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Absence Of Self

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I was smoking this bipoler trip,
filling its absence with some
frankincense, and dirt, i go
deep, untill i hit bottom, then
i get real brave and strip this
snakeskin off, so this is where
the stink was coming from,
so this is where sadness hangs
out, how sad i think, that this
place i some times call home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A. J. Mckinley 01 March 2007

A phenominal thought. I relate.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 December 2006

Rock bottom, is just that, unless you decide to do your best to make something positive happen...A fine piece, David...''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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