Absence Poem by Jahir Hasan

Absence



I climb up the ladder
leaning against the yellow tree in me.

I see people are enjoying theater in my world
asking,
Where is Beckett?
Godot has Come.

Saturday, September 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: absence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lantz Pierre 18 September 2017

The second stanza can stand quite alone (as it does on your poet's page as a quote) . So the puzzle remains, why climb a ladder that leans against the yellow tree within the self? To reach a higher self seems possible. For perspective. Beckett might approve these ideas. Then, the yellow tree? I'm stumped (no pun intended) . Random absurdity? That sign that Godot as arrived. Perplexing.

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Jahir Hasan 18 September 2017

Lantz Pierre, thank you so much for your valuable comments!

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 16 September 2017

Beautiful poem Jahir Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Jahir Hasan 17 September 2017

Mario, thank you so much for dropping a little dew on my poem. I have read some your poems. Those are interesting too. I hope we will exchange our views. Take care.

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