Abc Pain Poem by Tiffany Wolf

Abc Pain

Rating: 4.6


A gain with the pain,
B eing left alone.
C rying in the rain,
D escending like stone.
E veryone laughs and points,
F elt paralyzed through my spine.
G etting looser at the joints,
H earing about you, who used to be mine.
I ncomplete is how I am feeling,
J ust going through this day by day.
K ill the pain I am concealing,
L ove never again this way!
M ental note to keep in mind,
N ear to the end of my road.
O bviously I was a little blind,
P hrasing your words in code.
Q uiet down and leave me be,
R ush yourself to a far off place.
S ee how bad you've hurt me,
T rying to forget your face.
U nited we once were,
V eered off to one side.
W elcomed you... Immature,
X - perienced... My love had to subside.
Y ou aren't here, but you are there,
Z ipping up these emotions, because now I don't care!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 22 January 2009

Riddled with emotion hard hitting

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Eyan Desir 23 January 2009

very nice, keep it up

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Katy White 23 January 2009

Hey Tiffany, This is Katy and Autumn here! ! ! We just read ur poem(s) and they r all awsome! ! ! Keep up the great work, Love, Katy and Au-tum-in

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Robert Davis 25 January 2009

great poem, very creative!

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Tyler Dee 25 January 2009

Umm good job i like it

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Aleksandra Lachut 07 February 2009

Thank you for writing this poem because it perfectly describes me.

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Allan Macli Borges 04 February 2009

you're so brilliant! i think the bad things comes to push ourselves into a world of thoughts that must be exploreds by the words. you can do it as well as the greatest writers i've read indeed. hugs

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Ravi A 03 February 2009

Little girl, All I have to say is to be positive in life. You are too young to be frustrated. Start reading anything that is positive. Don't expect love from this world on the first place. Unless we give love to the world, the world is never going to give you love. Unconditional love, that we must train from the heart of hearts. Man's problem is that he always expects everything from this world but never tries to give it by himself in the first place. Thus, our life becomes a long spell of expectation and frustration. Try to see the hues of life from the standpoint of the world. Then, the whole world will be speaking unto you. This Nature will be voicing unto you. This universe will reveal its secrets unto you. We all require such a mental training. I have some poems at the site under the name of Ravi Panamanna. You may go through them and try to understand the various hues of life. Wishing Good luck....Ravi

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Christine Kerr 02 February 2009

Very good, Can't wait to read the rest of you poems

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Great concept, i shall try this one time.

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