A World! ! ! Poem by Luwi Habte

A World! ! !

Rating: 5.0


We own one mistaken World
Who let her people down like a maid
Who put her people under and let dead
And lost for ever and fade

We own one precious Planet
With sophosticated technology and Internet
With all the development we face and met
Most of the time it is usefull, I bet

We own fabulous Continents
Who let us live with our parents
And gave us special friends
As well as wonderful lives

We own one criminal Earth
Who separate unfairly and creates death
Also contains people with biggiest felony
For most kind people, Earth does not have harmony

Our complicated World! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 15 August 2009

Oh I feel this poem Luwi, I just hope that so many more get to read this wonderful poem....Our world still continues to spin in grief doesn't it sweetheart...excellent topic to write upon...and you have with pure heart...well expressed

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 01 September 2009

Even in his simplicity there is complexity people make the world more complicated. Bravo! in few lines you could describe Clearly our Complicated World.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 28 August 2009

A sensitive and sensible observation of world and happenings around. I liked the idea of being affectionate towards nature and our planet earth. Best wishes

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 20 August 2009

I like yr idea, it's indeed true. tks for sharing

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 16 August 2009

The world has become complicated really........nicely penned.....

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Obed Souza 15 August 2009

Yes, it´s true. That´s the purpose of literature, it helps us deal with all this mess around, the arts can help man understand themselves and the world.

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