A War Apiece Poem by Onkgopotse Ramatiti

A War Apiece

Rating: 5.0


[A sequel to 'He Thises, She Thats; They Both Bit-of-Bothed']

He is an ace at what he does
Yet she wouldn’t embrace all that fuss
He is the king in his castle
But she’s not keen on being a part of his hustle

Always accused of being ungrateful
Remaining silent at the mercy of being called unfaithful
Family members withdrawing their moral support
Friends suddenly unable to establish rapport

Corporal bruises artfully concealed through cosmetology
Emotional scars distilling through the craft of psychology
No regrets as all expenses are paid for
Going for hers; who really cares? She chose to live hardcore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 24 October 2008

hmmmm cribbers criibbers....where did u come from? good write

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

hhhmmm great theme for all women...great job. a 10.

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Little Hatila ;) 22 October 2008

you are right...as you promised, i really loved it...very well done...10 Hataw

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