*a Thing Called Fear* Poem by Joey Habib

*a Thing Called Fear*

Rating: 3.0


I have this thing living inside of me called FEAR,
and its growing bigger and bigger year by year...
I dont know if im scared to live,
or maybe im scared to die...
This is something you cant see with the untrained eye,
but its something i can feel,
its something thats real,
So im patiently waiting for this wound to heal...
it seems like its never ending,
so i keep bending and bending...
i think its got the best of me and im about to #@$*ing break,
but i have to hold and and be strong because this is my life at stake...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

The last line saved this poem because his life is at stake. I gave it an 8. I recommend that the writer read my poem, 'Life's Companion.' GW62

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Linda Weischedel 08 July 2008

Amazing poem, and I can relate to most of it Joey! I am giving you a 10. ~Linda~

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