A Sweet Fountain 05.09.2009 Poem by Margaret Alice

A Sweet Fountain 05.09.2009



Finally your words spilled over me
like a sweet fountain of life-giving
water, you buried your problems
and listened to me, the dam wall
broke, I told you my sorrows

Though you explained my miscon-
ceptions and self-recrimination and
offered solutions for every difficulty
the relief was short-lived – lasting
until nightmares invaded sleep

You explained that we cannot accept
responsibility for the actions of other
people, I agreed, while my spirit is
agitated in me, tension backache
and nausea belying my words

The fresh air of your words is washing
over me, the light of understanding is
dawning, I appreciate your intention
to help while you have your own
problems to solve

Though I cannot apply solutions im-
mediately, the kindness you have
shown me is an act of love that will
stay with me always

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Murdock 08 September 2009

Remember that noone can make you miserable, that you are in charge of your feelings. Change what you feel by feeling change. We dread change but Deepak Chopra says that change is the raw energy of creation. Partnerships are usually heavy to one side like a listing ship. Keep affairs of the heart in perspective. Yeats said in response to someone asking what one of his poems meant replied that readers decide what poems mean.

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
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