A Story Different Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

A Story Different

Rating: 5.0


When with my lips
I touched your fruity lips
You said, 'No'.
But the sparkle in your eyes
Said to me otherwise
Your tender fingers
Gripping on my shoulders
Told me a story different.
When we were lost in one another
Lips on lips
The story was different again.
There was nothing betwixt us
Not even our souls.
Our hearts beating
in unison now,
Now they've stopped beating,
My love…..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2022

Lips on lips The story was different again. There was nothing betwixt us Not even our souls...great romantic expression! I like this staggering piece!

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Anjandev Roy 25 April 2023

Fabulous expression throughout.....thanks for sharing....

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Thank you Anjandev. Love is an experience different

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 March 2022

I had posted some rejoinders to the notes posted here by my dear friends Dr Nehal, Susan Williams, Parameshwaran Nair and Robert. But they have vanished into thin air. What do I do?

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Ultimate enjoyment of love.5****

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

Lovely words, Dr Nehal

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Susan Williams 06 March 2022

utterly lovely and beguiling and sets the heart to dreaming---5 stars and favorited

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

So nice to see you here often. So happy you are here on ph. And feels great to read you again and again.

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You have rightly expressed the ultimate level of love and the outcoming bliss

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

My immense gratitude, sir.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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