Terence George Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)


A Slow Car - Poem by Terence George Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)

I knew that
was a slow car
because it was not
going fast

see the snail trail
S shaped wandering
all over the road

see the knuckles
gripping the wheel
straight rigid ram rod
driving position


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Written in February 2014 on the 25.2.2014.
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  • Gold Star - 13,236 Points Terry Craddock (2/26/2014 3:23:00 PM)

    A Slow Car

    I knew that was a slow car because it was not going fast
    see the snail trail S shaped wandering all over the road
    see the knuckles gripping the rigid ram rod driving position

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 26, 2014


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