A Sleep Without Dreams Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Sleep Without Dreams

Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes hoping to rest
but all I get is a mind full of pests
They jump and crawl, driving me crazy
I'd rather stay awake, sipping a jug of coffee
what's the use of sleeping without a dream?
It's like watching a movie without a screen
I can't escape, I can't fly or soar
I just lying in bed, feeling bored
am I alive or am I dead?
In this state I cannot ahead
my body is there, but my mind is already disappear
I can't even count sheep, I must be a pawn
my mind is buzzing, thoughts running wild
no peaceful slumber, just a restless child
come back my dreams and toss me up
and let me play with stars and moon.

Monday, March 18, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,nonsense,crazy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 19 March 2024

A dream is always welcome in either state of life. A nice write well conceived

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David Wood 18 March 2024

Disrupted sleep is its own nightmare. Try meditating.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 March 2024

The poem is crazy, but it's brilliant TFS Bravo! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2024

May you find the most amazing and wonderous of dreams! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2024

Very cool! .. What's the use of sleeping without a dream? Ever so awesomely composed! ..

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