A Silent Departure Poem by Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda

A Silent Departure

Rating: 5.0


Only Silence Was Exchanged,
With No Words Spoken;

Only Feelings Were Exchanged,
With No Touches Made;

Only Heart Beats Were Exchanged,
With No Hugs Made;

Only Thirsty Lips Turned Red,
With No Kisses Made;

Only Their Eyes Have Met,
With No Signs Exchanged;

Only Thoughts Have Flown Ever-since,
With No Messages Communicated;

Only Humility Was Experienced,
With No Submissions Made;

Only Their Souls Became One,
With No Ashes Left To Trashes;

Only Departure Has United Them,
With No Greetings Of Separation;

Monday, April 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: departure,love and dreams,love and life,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 August 2019

Beautiful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Naga.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 April 2019

superb poem/// love it.............

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2019

A well crafted wonderful poem, sir Naga....10+++++++++++

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Mohabeer Beeharry 23 April 2019

I like this write. It is original, and follows down to the main idea....departure

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Gajanan Mishra 23 April 2019

No greetings of separation, great write

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