**a Shore Of Sand Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

**a Shore Of Sand

Rating: 5.0


You are like the lightest feather
Sweetest candy
The aroma from your bosom
Like amber
Your lips life giving I suck
As my hands
Move on your contours

You are not in love
Not initiated into love
Yet
Come back
When your desires to love
Are like rivers in torrents
And I
A shore of sand
26/5/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

The way you expressed your feelings is exciting and lovely. And you have concluded wonderfully, love with 10+++

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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

wowwwwwwww sadiq what torrential desires +++10 anjali

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Naidz Ladia 27 May 2009

to be loved is not ours to do..but to love, it's our heart envolves..naizz

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Catrina Heart 27 May 2009

your love must be given freely without any expectations in return.....with a pure heart to mix on to color and paint the smiles.............10+++

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Reshma Ramesh 27 May 2009

beautiful......................

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Mamta Agarwal 25 June 2009

amazing last lines- very romantic, surreal.10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

good poem...congrats

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

'When your desires to love Are like rivers in torrents And I A sand shore' sir that was simply splended..enjoyed it very mcuh

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Akram Saqib 29 May 2009

A SAND SHORE IS NOT SO WEAK AS WATER MAY BLOW IT.GOOD THEME AND EXPRESSION WONDERFUL POEM WITH WORDSWORTH TOUCH

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Muhammad Ali 27 May 2009

super..... lovely poem very soft and nice piece! 10..

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