A Relative I'Ve Never Met Poem by Regan Meade

A Relative I'Ve Never Met



He died from cancer,
The relative I've never met.
He was gone before his wife,
This relative I've never met.
He was gone before my time.
That relative I've never met.
Now I shall never meet,
The relative I've never met.

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Leslie Neiwert 17 April 2009

I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G lol the repetion of '...a relative I've never met...' is kind of annoying. You could really have gone into detail a little more about his cancer, his experience, his wife (the Aunt) . How you felt about him dying, and not have been so monolouge about it. Great work though, I love that it's short and sweet ^.^ To the point makes people happy these days ^.^ And of course, the flow and rhyme were smooth.

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Regan Meade

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Las Cruses, New Mexico
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