A Reel Field Poem by Francie Lynch

A Reel Field

Rating: 5.0


My translucent skin is looser now,
I'm loosing my gray hairs;
Teeth are kept beside my bed,
My ears aren't on my head.

At times I wobble when I walk,
I creak across the floor;
At times I drool when I talk,
I don't vent anymore.

My fingers are gnarled;
My belly barreled;
My back is bent from care;
My toes are crooked,
My nose has hooked;
(Did I say I'm loosing hair?)

Friends are disappearing,
Like scenes in my rear view;
Once there were so many,
Now scattered,
And there's few.

I'm resident in my lazy boy,
Watching old re-runs;
But I have reels inside my head
Of desires we well-fed.

So I sit here,
And see you there,
With gray cardigan and gray hair.
But in my vault we're in a field
Of long grasses where we shared.

Monday, February 14, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: youth,desire,remembrance,memory,aging
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2022

Friends disappearing is a reminder of our own aging…. Age comes to us all, we need to learn to… That is all..

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David Wood 14 February 2022

Age come to us all, and it doesn't come alone. Brilliant poem, top marks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2022

Friends are disappearing, Like scenes in my rear view; Once there were so many, Now scattered, and there's few.....it resonates wit me!

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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