It's a cycle
Like a psycho
Like Michael
In Tyco®
it's aight though
We'll fight y'know
til the knight go
and the fright blow
So get out of sight yo
When we'll rise you might know
He's truthless
cause he ruthless
and useless
like a woodchuck toothless
In a noose pit
Until he lose it
Then he groove it
Cause he like to, move it move it
That's a tint shade lemur
Like a renegade femur
I guess I'm just a trick skate dreamer
Inspired by Lupe Fiasco's Blackout song recommend you listen to it.
*Creator - Me, Maxiro Xeniyah
Copyright 1/26/09 ©® Corey Threet
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I like this its like a rapp song, or you could jump rope to it.LOL very good
i rlly loved this poem as well! ! ! u have a true and natural talent! ! ! very well written and thought out! ! i would have to agree with thomas i could c this as a rap song
I love the action in this poem! I love your poems because I can relate to them!
It is a poem with free verses. Simile is used very frequently : 'It's a cycle/Like a psycho' and 'useless/like a woodchuck toothless' '' shade lemur/Like a renegade femur''. in order to enhance the character of the person of the poem, that the author is willing to dig a little deeper, as a painting in which the face is not drawn, but only shadows appear. We see climax, here, like 'We'll fight y'know/til the knight go/and the fright blow'.The poem has an abstract meaning, like 'He's truthless/cause he ruthless/and useless/like a woodchuck toothless''.I like it.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful writes from your mind...........an endless journey.