A Random Bird Poem by Poetic Amoure

A Random Bird

Rating: 3.5


Birds of a feather, with a birds eye view,
Can i have a map, dont know where im flying to.
Dont know where im going, just know its time to leave,
didnt know how to chew but i give what i recieve.
I fly where i please, and i plan as i go,
i spread my wings to fly yes I learn as i grow.
This poem may mean nothing but to me its everything,
cause i am only a bird in the morning hear me sing.
I fly to Phoenix Arizona, I fly south in the winter,
I was a beautiful creature when I looked in the mirror,
but for now Im just a random bird lost without guidence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 June 2011

A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Jahrae Patterson 14 June 2011

Very well written...it loses its beat at the end last two to four lines I'd say

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Urshula Davis 13 June 2011

Go head girl! Do ya thang! I love it bravo bravo! -clap clap-

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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