A Promise Kept** Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

A Promise Kept**

Rating: 5.0


For the sake of a promise kept
I'm still searchin ur way
I hope u'll clear ur debt
Of my love some day

I'd given u ur share
But y did u have to depart?
Into the void I stare
with a promise kept but a broken heart

People shout out saying
Till eternity, will i wait?
Completely ignorant 'bout paying
The debts of love and hate

U said u'll always be there for me
When stealthily ur death crept
We were betrayed by destiny
leaving behind, our broken dreams but
a promise kept...............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 17 November 2008

good poem...talking frank...good rhyming there, Pooja...impressive piece 10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 October 2008

Very well expressed, friend. I really loved it. Thank you very much.

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Vikash Kumar 29 April 2008

The words used by you in the poem make the expression so better and meaningful.Really you need to keep your hope up all time. Vey Good work.

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