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Connie Leigh Lindsay
(5/24/2009 9:09:00 PM) |
I really liked this one.It described exactly how I feel at times.And you can't really tell anyone close to you how you feel.I tried one time and was told that I was being too dramatic.Since then I just say that they wouldn't understand.
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Greenwolfe 1962
(4/1/2009 10:44:00 PM) |
I agree with several others that you have a lot of wonderful phrases in this piece.
Some of them are quite powerful in their impact on the reader. The reader wants
to help you right now. Yours, is really a call to action. I think whoever reads it
feels that way.
GW62
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Angela Anna
(11/28/2008 10:24:00 PM) |
wow. i love this poem.
'Just laying here dying inside slowly
Pain twisting around in me
Inside and out pain is all around me
No matter where I go or who I see' <- my favorite.
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*Trusting You*
(11/28/2008 10:02:00 PM) |
No one even sees the pain I hold inside
I can cry a few thousand tears and no one would
even notice
I know of that... people think I am all happiness and giggles but really I have a lot of pain just hiden inside me. good job.
Becca
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