A New Start Poem by Robert Roberts

A New Start

Rating: 4.3


The water licked down my back
as it gave birth to the purity
of a new year it aided the love
and tears the pain and fears
that i over came
it 3am in the morning
and a new year dawn on me
a new day lit up under
the moon lit horizon
eyes watered up as i try
to write.
The sky gave up
the playground and
all was needed
was the players
standing tall with
my back to last year
i walked out of
the dark and into
the light of a new era
shadows cast over my world
keeps the adrenaline in me running
as my momentum begins to flow
goals to be achieved as the slate
is wiped clean as
i start over again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 01 April 2018

Robert, such a refreshing poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... big 10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2018

Momentum! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Wonderful poem about a new beginning..congratulations for poem of the day..10

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Jeannette Heywood 01 April 2018

Reminds us to keep moving forward. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2019

Congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day for second time.

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Shaun Cronick 01 April 2020

Congratulations on being chosen with this fine poem. Truly deserved and thank you for writing and sharing. I wish you the best this life has to offer. Take care and the loved ones around you.

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Lyn Paul 01 April 2020

The adrenaline can achieve great things particularly in sport. Especially With the crowds excitement for the game. Thank you. Sorry your poem has been criticised by someone uninterested in PH just someone who needs to find his own way in life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2020

as my momentum begins to flow goals to be achieved as the slate is wiped clean as i start over again...... touching inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day for third time

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Chinedu Dike 01 April 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings on the New Year resolution. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2020

Beautiful poem penned on the new year and it's changing resolution..congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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