A Monsoon Precursor Comments

Nicely crafted imagery. Awe and contentment. The smells when parched earth is satiated. Well done.___Baru Gobira

Diction is so effective to make me visualise monsoon. Great work, Ma'am and thanks for sharing.

nice expression of nature and it's act. very impressive and understandable by all walks of life.

in a flash i saw the earth lying smug and shining like a pearl bathed… satiated, she threw up her unique perfume… Fabulous! You have brought out the beauty of the first rain so well in this write. I could actully smell the fresh moist earth after reading it.