A Moment Of Liberation Poem by Michael Hopkins

A Moment Of Liberation



Let not the outside

Distract you

No more

Rather

Feel that joy within

Which bubbles up

From an undefined

Source

Bubbles up naturally

As a spring from

Deep within the Earth

Yet

This joy is not just of this Earth

But

A joy

That comes from a place

Deep within yourself

A place unguarded

Fully accessable

The watchman has left

Due to the billance

Of a Light

Now

The cells of the human body

Sing with joy

The heart awakens

And

Is enlivened

Peace is at hand

And

A lion speaks

To a lamb

Angels speak to one another

As the Earth responds

A chorus begins

A song sung in the freedom

Of

A moment of liberation

Unite

A union is formed

Hearts sing out

A song of Love

Heaven and Earth respond

And Peace

Prevails for this moment

As joy returns

As God and Man

Unite

And

Be as one

In

Love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: This poem was written on August 23,2013 and published for the first time today here on my blog.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Feipeng Shang 30 October 2017

The cells of the human body Sing with joy - That's when reading a poem :)

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Khairul Ahsan 16 October 2013

Not a fun to read a poem without punctuation marks!

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Michael Hopkins 17 September 2013

Dear Words' Knight: That is my intention. I am very aware of the proper use of puntuation. I have chosen to have a cerain style that is flowing or uninterupted. If i were an English Teacher this would be unacceptable. My poetry is written from a place of creativity in which I have the freedom to write my own rules and I do. So rule number one is: Throw out all puntuation. Rule nuber 2: Be ready to deal with the critics. Thanbks for your comment. i do appreciate that you took the time to write me a messsage. Kind regards, Mike

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Words' Knight 16 September 2013

A complete absence of punctuation.

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