A Man, A Cloak, A Gondola Poem by Sophia White

A Man, A Cloak, A Gondola

Rating: 5.0


A Man, A Cloak, a Gondola,
A Subterranean Sea.
These Four recurring Elements
Compose a Mystery.

I draw him many, many times
Boating on that Sea.
And beneath his slippr’y boat
An eel with dagger teeth.

I don’t know how this imagery
Is always in my mind.
Perhaps it is a forewarning,
A vision of some kind.

A Man, A Cloak, A Gondola,
A Subterranean Sea.
The Four recurring Elements
Compose a Mystery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 31 May 2006

Cool! ! I really liked this poem. Interesting concept. Well done! Hugs, Dee

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Will Barber 31 May 2006

A religious philosopher said that the essential religious experience was awe - that the Mystery must remain unreduced to rational explanations in order to retain its power. This very lovely poem manages to awe and mystify. It also echos a good many mythological resonances. Truly impressive. And VERY well-written.

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