A Love That Will Last Poem by Dark Revenge Angel Night

A Love That Will Last



A whistle
A kiss
A hug
A 'good bye'
The last thing
I saw of you,
You were
Walking away.

A tear
A sad smile
A 'so long'
A dead body
Now that you
Are gone, What
Am I supposed
To do? Will you
Wait for me? ?

A gun
A puddle of blood
A shot
A smile
To be with you
Again, now and
Forever is my dream
We will finally be
Together again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetessh Sabrr 17 October 2008

our sweetest songs are those that tell about our saddest thoughts so anyways, i found it sweet, even if there is pain inlaid. very crisp and to the point. the young writer is inspiring :)

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Kesav Easwaran 08 April 2008

a very sad poem...the end? certainly not. look at the east. happiness rising... for you... and for you alone...

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