A Love Story To Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

A Love Story To

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A love story too

We are making love
But in your eyes I see
You think of someone else.
At climax
You shout out the name
"Rudolf."
Who the hell is he?
I resentfully ask.
The red-nosed reindeer
You say and smile.

Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Upendra Upm 03 July 2018

words, sentence have gone totally unfettered spelling magic.It is a harbinger of freest expresson that will broker in peace.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 July 2018

nice loving reply- The red-nosed reindeer love can walk or run more than one If love can not understand where is its good or bad! .....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

Eyes reflect love in wonderful way and we feel this. An amazing poem is beautifully penned...10

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