Treasure Island

B.B. Loring

(October 24,1995 / Maine, United States)

A Light Somewhere Between All This Mess


I never did know
With all the big plans I had
That when I would look back
My life,
With all it's deep depressive days
and hours of elation
People that I grew close to
and the ones I lost
Somewhere
Between all the messes I made
That you would be the biggest event
Now don't you dare tell me
You were insignificant
You were but one year
And stood out like a millenium

Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013

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