A Life Thats Unwanted Poem by Crimson Love

A Life Thats Unwanted

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I hate what I've become,
No one knows me,
not even myself,
I'm living the life you wanted,
I'm living the life you dream about,
When in reality, My dreams are about your life,
Wanting the things I cannot have,
your life seems so much more simple,
When mine is a web of torture.

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Thoughts Of A Poet 19 October 2012

i love wht you said about the web of torture tht's a good title for a poem may i use it in one of my poems tht i wanna write one day please?

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Lenore Lee 30 October 2011

So amazing. We all feel we're living a life we shouldn't be at times - stay strong.

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Shadow Girl 03 October 2011

Brilliantly written. Great thought-provoking and heartfelt write. -SG

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Linda Maree 02 October 2011

I like this poem. You must be proud to be in the top 500 poets at such a young age. good for you

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