A Lesson In Love Poem by Ayana makonnen

A Lesson In Love

Rating: 5.0


Can I talk of a lesson
I thought it was a blessing
Sent to me from heaven above
Oh how I wanted to be so much in love
The time spent together seem so real
I did not know that he would steal
My heart my soul
And everything that was whole
This lesson was one that had to be told







Ayana Makonnen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 20 April 2009

Well, I am sure you were not the first Finnish woman to lose her heart and soul to a rascal, Ayana, and you surely will not be the last. I liked the style of your fine poem which was written in a simple and direct style, easy for a reader to understand, and there wasn't a complaining in it like you see in so many other broken heart poems. As your poem says, you did indeed learn a lesson from that experience and like all things involving romance, it's what you learned from it that counts. Welcome to poem hunter, Ayana! Carl.

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