A Jit A Jot A Tiny Dot Poem by shimon weinroth

A Jit A Jot A Tiny Dot

Rating: 3.8


gloved against contact
by weather and epidermis
pop crinkle and crackle,
mute sonic traces of
viruses leaping, aborting
from one cell to another

gamma photons popping up
at strange spots
twinkling out
disappeared from the screen
without requiem and ressurect

gassed out pass away
flow with time
into sparkling space

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 23 May 2009

'gamma photons popping up at strange spots twinkling out disappeared from the screen without requiem and ressurect' More than amazing,10++

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Reshma Ramesh 03 October 2008

very very intriguing indeed superb....10! !

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Nathaniel Booker 13 September 2008

Truly a please to read your work, this is a great piece, tho' I couldn't help but think of Cancer... nevertheless... *10* Be Well

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Ana Monnar 02 August 2007

Very clever writing. : -))

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