A Heart To Spare Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

A Heart To Spare

Rating: 5.0


I broke down in tears
When I told you my fears
You patted my back
Then left me to pick up the slack
I kept waiting thinking you’d turn around
But you were gone without a sound
It wasn’t easy to say in the least
For my heart was broken and I had to pick up each piece
How could I ever have thought you cared
If I’d known my heart would have been spared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 18 June 2009

vow! beautifull and emotionaloem. voted10 surya

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Carrie Sprouse 21 July 2008

i love this poem, its sad and amazing

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I feel the pain in this piece and pray you feel better soon! You have a cute rhyme scheme going there and show alot of promise in your writing! Take care of U Shelley

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very good, very good about a broken heart.. ilyy booo! x3, millie

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