Ebi Robert

Rookie - 26 Points (6 feb 1990 / Yenagoa(Niger Delta))

A GEM SPEAR


Tip-toe tints tent teach me
steps and stamp me to blood.
Spiting on me spirits for it.
Feet, faster than fowls flood.
Thus she focuses on him of free verse cord.
Sump gem capital catapults inn.
There are two spear and two seats present.
One for her, the huntress of zood,
another for the male adversary of Dood.
There they drop their swords on the sand
and the dust evaporate to them discuss.
There she placed her armour on his arm
when she gave him a gem spear.
That sinks from his place to her spear.

Submitted: Monday, May 10, 2010
Edited: Friday, December 05, 2014

Topic of this poem: Art

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  • Rookie P.k Freitas (11/29/2013 4:50:00 AM)

    This is simply lovely, very fluid and flowing and excellent verbiage as well. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,164 Points Herbert Guitang (11/26/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Poet Ebi Robert.

    Kindly rate and comment my poems
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  • Rookie - 0 Points Alex Roth (11/26/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    I like your use of vivid imagery to describe the confrontation. The dusts' evaporation is symbolic of their conflict evaporating. This was very evocative poem. Please check out my poems and let me know what you think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Fox Nekitsune (11/25/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    I got lost in this poem reading the lines again and again, very enjoyable and unfettered. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Folayemi Akande (11/12/2011 3:29:00 AM)

    This is aliteration in perfection. I am overwhelmed by ur exagerated use of rhymes and by being a good user of figures of speech. (Report) Reply

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