A Few Comments (On Marie Shine's Various Posts) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
A Few Comments (On Marie Shine's Various Posts)
I am tall and too delicate,
you cannot climb at my top,
I shall be broken and you'll fall down,
touch my top in my virtual image,
I am there in the depths of water,
come on I shall hug you and you'll kiss me.
Don't chase me in the infinite universe,
locate me on your earth.
Our colors attract us to each other from a distance
but to feel the perfumes we should come close,
so close that we do not remain two.
Don't search the lover of nature now,
he has dived in the depths,
he is being hugged and nature is being kissed by him.
the lover is now here,
look at his shocking pink color,
he has come out of the depths as beautiful flowers.
Once upon a time he was an ignorant human,
now he is the universe,
expressing himself as a human for a little while.
He got it,
love is the secret of life,
pretty simple,
he had come in the world with a good heart
and he nicely performed his job,
he is changed in a flower,
will be faded leaving behind the color and fragrance.
He got it, love is the secret of life, pretty simple, he had come in the world with a good heart and he nicely performed his job, he is changed in a flower, will be faded leaving behind the color and fragrance....Nice stanza.
Beautiful comments together become a sweet and great poem. We feel the perfume sprinkled through every word with a great theme. Love is definitely secret of life and we realize this secret. Expressing humanity through love and perception is great.
He got it, love is the secret of life, pretty simple, he had come in the world with a good heart and he nicely performed his job, he is changed in a flower, will be faded leaving behind the color and fragrance.....touching expression with nice theme. So brilliantly penned, lovely poem. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thank u ji.10
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5/24/2024 4:06:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
touch my top in my virtual image, I am there in the depths of water, come on I shall hug you and you'll kiss me. Don't chase me in the infinite universe, locate me on your earth. love is the secret of life. your great heart praises all other poets dear Akhtar, Marie Shine is a great person, very loving and caring and writes beautifully well. all know that...... than k u. tony