' A Fantasy Re-Lived ' Poem by indira babbellapati

' A Fantasy Re-Lived '

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A once upon a time
Live fantasy insulated me
Just as on that evening when
It diluted misery to its last dreg
Dissolving it in the scent of
Freshly watered grass
And the melting sun
Twilight shadows
Played upon the eager skin
Till darkness descended
To breathe life into your hands
That picked the water droplets
Off my faltering feet

How we’re cut off from
The physicality of the surroundings
Even the gardener, reduced to a dot
In the fading light of the sun
Only the scent we had absorbed
Wafting around…

That fairytale fantasy
Came to be seated by me
On this dark cement bench
Yes, I relived every moment
Of that once upon a time fantasy
On this summer evening
Under a flickering bulb…

10 Apr 2011
06.05hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar 25 April 2011

I like it very much for the exposure of perfectly depicted details which can be imagined without leaving out any part...Thank you...

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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