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V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India

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Don’t close your door
On my face so coldly
Let me hold your hand
And walk again boldly

I cannot bear this alone if
Your don’t love empowers
With you I can face storms
But alone not even showers

Your smile revives the heart
As a dying person gets nectar
Your touch is so freshening
Without it I’m a falling star

V P Mahur

Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: love

poem poems alone dying Storms

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Composed on March 11,2014.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 April 2014

I can appreciate the second stanza very well. Regards Sally

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Sreelekha Premjit 14 March 2014

without you I am a falling star.. nice write

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Colleen Courtney 11 March 2014

With you I can face storms. But alone not even showers. Love that line! Good job!

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