A Drunken Write Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Drunken Write

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a drunken write
the words would be dazed
the rhymes could slip or stagger
no cops to sniff me out
thank god for that
i could bring it out
don't worry i dont puke
i enjoy my drink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 07 May 2009

simple and beautiful to ponder on....... but drunken the writings are amazing and their thughts flow from depth.......... very nice for sharing.

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Barry A. Lanier 01 May 2009

Reminding 'somewhere in drink, one tends to think, with courage maybe liquid he knows, but in the end, the verbage extends, and oh how the emotions flow'

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Sandra Martyres 30 April 2009

Original piece Samanyan.....drunk or sober you write well....Cheers

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Carl Harris 30 April 2009

Well, samanyan, throughout poetic history, some of the finest poetry was written by drunken poets! I could name many, for example, whose best work was done when they were thoroughly drunk, especially our more modern poets. But the older,18th & 19th century poets were much the same. Nothing wrong with enjoying a drink or two, and doing so in your home certainly prevents you from driving under the influence or being apprehended by the police. Of course, the most famous drunken American poet would have to be the great Edgar Allan Poe, who actually died from acute alcohol poisoning at the age of 40! Great write, so long as you don't suffer from the hangover afterwards! Carl.

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