A Diabetic Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Diabetic

Rating: 5.0


Weak is my eyesight to watch
Feeble are my legs to walk
Deficient are my arms to hug
Shaky is my tongue to talk,

Bulky are my hips to jump
Slow are the systems to digest
Sugar I avoid being a diabetic
But never put my lips on a test,

Even a little sugar can do that
What I cannot do usually
Feel sugar more than anyone
Your lips are sweet abnormally!

A Diabetic
Saturday, April 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2019

Liked the tantalizing picture that goes with this wonderful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2019

A fascinating poem well crafted. Though a kiss is the sweetest of the sweet, it.will not affect a diabetic person instead it will bring happiness and therefore enhanced its.energy. Wonderfully conveyed and composed.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 April 2019

To diabatic as is sugar, to man of tired limbs, tired mind, a kiss, And, and from a young miss! ! !

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Aqua Flower 13 April 2019

This is a very interesting poem on the sweetness of a kiss. Luckily a kiss, even though it is packed with sweetness, will not negatively affect the diabetic condition. Sweet poem.

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